Imagine living in a place where there
is little crime, everyone has a job, and everyone has a home. It is perfect;
the ideal society for the whole world to see and follow its examples. This
place is Svalbard, Norway. In the newest Upfront
Magazine issue, the article
“No Job? Get Lost!” by Andrew Higgins, states that this territory is a very
safe and stands out of the rest of Norway. Only six police officers attend the
only jail cell in all of Svalbard, and everyone leaves their belongings
unattended, sure that nothing bad will happen to it, even though everyone owns
a gun. Everyone has a job and a permanent home; a big difference from the rest
of Europe. Throughout the article, Andrew cleverly shows that this part of
Norway is the best, compared to the rest of Norway, and the world.
Cleverly Higgins provides the readers with facts and loaded words, to enforce
his claim and convince readers that he is correct. Take for example, when he
says that unlike the rest of Europe, this act of banning unemployment and
homelessness was to ensure that no one “freezes to death.” In a place where it
snows all the way up to summer, it seems great that the government is doing
this. Yet the “freezing to death” seems to over exaggerate, yet fits so well
within the article. “Get cold”, or even “get sick” seems like a more realistic
way of talking, but “death” makes us admire and feel proud of this government.
It makes us feel like the government is a hero, saving the lives of the
citizens from the ferocious claws of coldness. Also, Andrew writes that Odd
Olsen Ingero, the governor, says that, “[It] is a very quiet and law-abiding
society”. Providing this quote from the governor, the leader, and someone
important who lives in this place, is meant to convince us that this place is
even recognized as great by its own leaders. If he knows all the statistics,
then most likely it is safe and credible to hear, that the citizens follow the
laws, from his mouth. Finally, he states that “No serious crimes have been
reported so far this year…” giving us the feeling of reassurance for this
place. This place has no serious crime to worry about, just little solvable
ones like shoplifts and “reckless driving”. Their police attend 100 cases
a year, while we in N.Y.C already had 332 homicides since December 29, not
counting other crimes such as robberies, assault, abuses, and more. These
pieces of evidence and words, that quickly make simple sentences bolder, make
us feel and believe that Svalbard truly is a safe haven.
All in all, I really do agree with Andrew with this place being a safe haven.
His evidence did get to me in various ways. The trust the citizens all have
with one another is incredible. Here in N.Y.C. I’m sure that not many are
willing to leave their personal belongings vulnerable to a whole throng of
strangers. Another place that got to me was where Andrew said that immigration
is largely blamed for the rise of crime rates in various places, yet in
Svalbard 1/3 of the population are immigrants and the crime rate is still low.
After reading this article I began to wonder, why is it that many places
including the United States cannot manage to be a place similar to this. I then
realized that it doesn’t take laws against unemployment or homelessness to
change the world, from its dark self to its best possible self. It isn’t much
of the governments’, of all the countries, fault either; it is our fault, the
people. Had we only stopped being so self-centered and took a bit of our time
to think of what we can do to contribute to the world, to contribute to the
homeless man’s/woman’s situation, to contribute to those who lie on hospital
beds at this instant, to contribute to those who are suffering economically, or
to contribute to anything or anyone else who is not in a great state of being
right now, instead of ourselves. What a great place we would be living in, and
life as well. Now, what can you do to make the world a better place to live
in?
I love your hook at the beginning of the introduction.
ReplyDeleteI had no idea there were so few guards for one prison cell. Very interesting!
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love your concluding paragraph. Your ideas about how the citizens are responsible was really smart, we too often blame the government for changes we should be making ourselves. Incredible post, amazing opinions!
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